I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 8 August 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hi it is Mattisin and I like the way you hade a lot of facts on you slide can you pliz have more fact piz comment on my blog and comment back
ReplyDeleteThank you Mattison and I will always try to put more facts in and do you think that I should change the title to a more interesting title.
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A good start on this text Canada. You have picked some interesting facts.
ReplyDeleteJust make sure you do not just paste facts from websites but that you know and understand what the big, tricky words mean.
You can carry on with the rest of this weeks Bloom's choices now, e.g. an acrostic poem about 'Whakaari'.
ReplyDeleteHey Amber This is such a good story that you made it makes senses and you have full stops, commas, expression and speech marks. I like how you made this story because you read read your story and it makes sense. I like this story because you have made it a good story because it has your name and how old you are. I like how you made it hope you comment on my blog. Thank you.
Hey Canada I like how you made this slideshow because it has a title and it has your name on it.Your slideshow makes senses but on the fourth slide I can only see the words a little bit but I hope you make the words a little bit big so I can see it. I hope you comment on my blog sometime and I might put a comment on your blog. Thank you for putting this on your blog. When I read your post I learnt. How there was 20 people in the world live in a volcano.
Hey Canada I like how you made this slideshow because it has a title and it has your name on it.Your slideshow makes senses but on the fourth slide I can only see the words a little bit but I hope you make the words a little bit big so I can see it. I hope you comment on my blog sometime and I might put a comment on your blog. Thank you for putting this on your blog. When I read your post I learnt. How there was 20 people in the world live in a volcano.
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