Ziggy
She has blonde hair and she wears crop tops.
Bright baby blue eyes like the sky. Her breath smells like beautiful smelling Roses.
She stomps like a elephant every time she walked in the room .
She touches you like lightning.
She carries a cute little teddy bear and she likes to sleep with it.
She has a sweet calming marshmallow voice and she says i love my life.
hi canda
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i really enjoyed this because of the part that it say. her touches you like lightning .to make this even better you could make it a tiny bit smaller. i remember when i was learning about how to make a poem to.
ReplyDeletei really enjoyed this because of the part that it say. her touches you like lightning .to make this even better you could make it a tiny bit smaller. i remember when i was learning about how to make a poem to.
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ReplyDeletefantistic story Canada
ReplyDeletehi canada is is one amazing poem this was really fun to read. and i love how you put your punctuation in the right place. i love all your description about your character.
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