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Thursday 5 July 2018

wacky story

I wonder is it possible to tip over a cow? Wacky story By canada I was with my dad out on the farm feeding the cows I had this crazy idea to tip over the cows because I wondered what would happen when i push over a cow before my dad came back because he was going to go get some oats out of the garage After 10 seconds I ran to the farm shed and grabbed a rack from the haye and pushed the cows over it was like dominoes then i ran back to the farm sheed and put the rack back into the haye like it was before and ran in the house and suddenly my dad went into the farm sheed the rack was not in the right position so he was very concerned why is it like that Then he went to go feed the cows some oats he saw them on the ground like they are dying Then he yelled out WHO DID THAT and I said I didn’t do it so he believed me so I am so glad that he didn't see me. My wacky story
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  1. Sotheara23 July 2018 at 14:32

    hi canada i like your wacky story,its really funny for me when the cow tipped over next time you can add more writing detail

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  2. Lita25 July 2018 at 14:31

    hi canada, its me lita
    i really liked the way you made this story interesting and made me really into it
    i don't think you need to add anything in this story everything is perfect. this sory takes me back when my dad was telling me and my sister stories. the story was ages when my dad was like in his 20s. he told me that he was in his farm getting milk from the cows. whie he was doing that he said that the cow that he was milking was getting tired. he knew that the cow was getting tired but he still didn't care so he just kept milking then suddenly the cow sat down and then boom the cow was sitting on my dads face and his face landed in the bucket of milk.

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